It Shows, When In Love. Comments

nice really nice. good work

I really like this poem. Good work, keep it up: -)

a thousand phrases with lips locked eye beholding eye lost in the other breathe in breathe out fill me up leave me gasping where there're no spaces left your bouncing and romping my life now you know I love you Fahim, forgive me - your write is so simple and angelic it provoked some thoughts in me urging me to let them out. mark

yet love when scintillating by the sizzling mist of love over the lips, the thirst of sand as when quenched by the drizzles of rain...............wonderful imagery of love, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

Honeyed very well...such a sweetness. Touched the core of human love. God Bless.

a very sweet love peom,

cute and simple; beatiful and lovely :)

lovely love poem, thanks for shraing

i stumbled and fell, but crawled back and standing upright......to fall again.thanks for the piece bro.

nice love poem.... when in love you forget yourself....................god bless you

it shows that love has no boundaries regardless of race, religion or distance..... simple remarkable piece. Thanks