(From the office)
this 26th August, on the coming back road
In the bus I was in me; subconsciously I
Forgot the activeness of colorful outside
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A well scribed fantastic poem. Simply marvelous.....10++++
'life is easy in an unharmed place In silence' - Yes, it's true!
the life is easy in unharmed place In silence, rhythmic life increases the natural grace with HIS GRACE EM BE
Date of my transcendental mind discovered Another path; incalculable sparrows were There on the mango tree beyond of the mosque Mosque drew my attention to the silent graves And rhythmic twittering of the birds; oh, where I was I know not; but the afternoon holiness showed Showed that- the life is easy in unharmed place In silence, rhythmic life increases the natural grace- - Your poem draws us to the beauty and serenity of nature.
Beautiful chain poetry. Well composed with beautiful essence as coming back from the day long work. Beautiful.
Struggle with self nicely put it in this poem, great imagery and fine flow.10+ Mosque drew my attention to the silent graves And rhythmic twittering of the birds; oh, where I was I know not, but the afternoon holiness showed\\\\