It Seems To Me Comments

I agree with Omar, his suggestion is good.. Good poem my friend :)

you know alicia? i think that if you could gather all these thoughts expressed in your new poems in a big poem and if you could put every thought in a cinquain it could be better i think....that's only a suggestion...because your poems talk about one case so your poem would be very strong like the countries if they were divided they will be weak....like the arab countries eh! :) haha