Friday, April 20, 2018

It's Your Love Sweetheart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw a color that enchanted my eyes
I brought my eyes too close to it,
the color entered in me.
I saw an aroma that hypnotized my nostrils
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 April 2018

A beautiful poem of love. It captures the wonders and beauty of love. Elegantly crafted write.10

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Loke Kok Yee 20 April 2018

Love found its way through your sensors to stimulate your heart and capture your soul. And it captivated me as well. Thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 20 April 2018

External stimuli enter through one's senses. Love enters as you enter yourself. Beautiful!

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Akhtar, a wonderfully penned write.

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