It's You I Love It's Your Love I Miss Comments
It's been hours now just laying in bed
Almost time to get up for work but only your in my head
I'm laughing at myself for wishing for the same fantasy
Of you finally choosing you really want to be with me
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are you alive? on PH? i like this, BUT it could USE some editing/proofreading! to MyPoemList. bri :)
It is deffinetly one of the most painful experiences loosing someone who means so much to you. A heart-breakingly beautiful poem.
John, I really feel for you in this well versed poem. A love lost is the hardest thing to bear. Thank you for sharing these thoughts.
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7/28/2025 12:27:53 AM # 1.0.0
i like the feel of this, but it 'needs' editing to be really pleasing (TO ME) grammatically. i'm going to use it [as is] in my July 2018. any questions, feel free to ask. thanks. bri :)