Saturday, November 11, 2017

It's You Comments

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It's YOU
Who'll console
your child's yearn and uproar.
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

The alliteration or rhyming pattern choreography or empathy nothing 'll work.i enjoy this poem.thanku sir for shairing this poem..10+++++

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Richard Wlodarski 12 November 2017

A most powerful plea for parents to do a much better job with their children's upbringing. To instill good values and morals. To empower. This is an excellent thought-provoking write! Binaya, thank you for bringing it to my attention.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2017

A fatther or mother consoles his or her child from yearn and uproar. This has been so nicely and hauntingly you have inscribed in you poem 'It's you', dear Binay. Beautifully crafted. Let it be quoted some lines... It's YOU Who'll console your child's yearn and uproar. It's YOU Who'll play horse for it. ************************ You know your child's form and fashion habit and emotion it's locus standi you know better. Thanks for sharing.10

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