Tuesday, November 30, 2010

It's Winter, Here Again! Comments

Rating: 4.0

She thrilled us before she left last year
With a promise to be back again,
Lovely were the moments she took with her
But she vowed to return 'em once again.
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari
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Shahzia Batool 17 February 2012

it is qualified to be quoted for season's greetings...the season of barrenness is presented in a pleasant light

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Katherine Chandler 09 January 2012

Jameel, this is a lovely seasonal poem well written with rich imagery and a good storyline.

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Rekha Mandagere 05 January 2012

Nice picture of seasonal changes is brought out using colourful imagery. Excellent write

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Nadine Mushcab 24 February 2011

As basic as this poem is it's very emotional! Winter is my favorite season and everything in this poem is true..and you have done a good job making the summer and winter seem like people: P..

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