She thrilled us before she left last year
With a promise to be back again,
Lovely were the moments she took with her
But she vowed to return 'em once again.
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Jameel, this is a lovely seasonal poem well written with rich imagery and a good storyline.
Nice picture of seasonal changes is brought out using colourful imagery. Excellent write
As basic as this poem is it's very emotional! Winter is my favorite season and everything in this poem is true..and you have done a good job making the summer and winter seem like people: P..
it is qualified to be quoted for season's greetings...the season of barrenness is presented in a pleasant light