Monday, July 20, 2015

It’s Time To Move On Comments

Rating: 3.8

Why did you return?
And opened an old hurt that I burn
A black page in my life that I turn
And memories that I wanted not to be shown
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Chinedu Dike 25 July 2015

Distress occasioned by disappointment while in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. Love could be whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart with unique and lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Allotey Abossey 20 July 2015

Staying behind is not an option... Whatever happens in life man must move on. Good work

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