'' It's Time To Feel, Ill At Ease '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' It's Time To Feel, Ill At Ease ''

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They say it is written,
In the good book,
With the God we are smitten,
He'll return for a look,
We could well be bitten,
Or at worse, forsook,
If he doesn't like what he sees.

His teachings ignored,
We do make him bleed,
With god we are bored,
For them we've no need,
It is trouble we've stored,
In our desire for greed,
We've developed a liking for sleaze.

Between rich and poor,
The gap grows ever wide,
It does not reassure,
Our behaviour is snide,
There is no cure,
Our sins we can't hide,
Our creator we cannot appease.

We continued our ways,
Despite what we knew,
Dishonesty still pays,
That decision we'll rue,
It's the end of our days,
So, let chaos ensue,
We'll no longer do what we please.

At us he may leer,
For refusing to atone,
Among all of us here,
Who will cast that first stone?
We should feel fear,
To god it's well known,
His commandments are but a disease.

It's written in papyrus,
One day he'll come back,
Though not very desirous,
We are under attack,
Could it be as a virus?
As of detail there's a lack,

‘' It's Time, To Feel, Ill At Ease ‘'

Friday, March 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 13 March 2020

How very well said and how fully true and sad, This poem summarizes to perfection our crumbling world, " In our desire for greed We have developed a liking for sleaze." The whole poem is an acute and very correct portrait of our world today.Nothing to be proud of, to say the least You have captured its sinful and viral times in an unforgettable poem! But at least we try to teach and make things change.

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