It's Time To Act! Comments

Verily, drugs are a curse on man especially the youngsters....10 I invite you to read my poems

Wow! You brought your stone to the building of humanity. That is a salvatory poem conducive to help smokers stop smoking.

This poem speaks for itself. This is very well written. - DarkX474

It si Time to Act. You are a very observant girl.

what a lovely and positive poem...i enjoyed it..it's time to act thanx for sharing (:

Great insight for one so young. You are obviously a very observent young girl. Not one wasted word.

lovely verses.....its amazing you have such a vision at a tender age. Good work!

Meriam, you have voice to tell every little words to the world, at 11 years old you are really have a big potential as a big name in poetry, :) keep it up ok? _Unwritten Soul

True message from one so young poetry is not always about flowers nice to see...regards

read the poem and loved it. You're a genius!

a gr8 n powerful messge...... nicely written and u hve a great grip on the topic

Hi Meriam, A well written poem and very right topic whic gives a powerful message to the people all around the world. A great poem....

Great poem, I can relate to it. But I don't know you so I don't know why you asked me to read this.

This poem is carring a very stong message in a simple way. Well done

Very impressive! A strong message and wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more from you!

nice poem great meaning

I respect the rights one has to their own body, but you present a strong opinion here, and you express it well. Great poetry.

Very wise words and a powerful message.....u r wise beyond your years and a fantastic poet. SG

The message is important and its time to do something before its too late. Think before we do something. This poem is well done. Keep up the fanastic job.

I love the danger framed by the last line. The soul just fades away What else of value is there to lose Meriam. That has to be the vision that would be so frightening to see..... A persons soul just has had enough, And gets up and slowing starts walking toward the door........ That a vision you have painted..... This one could really be a great one..... Plant that vision thousands of times....millions of times..... Great one......Jim Troy