That's it!
No more excuses!
I'm laying down some rules!
Just so you don't misunderstand...
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She's REally annoyed! ... I'll have to do the tears thing... nice write, Mary, and neat rhyming...
We're not as tough as we think we are Mary! ! ! ! ! We're pretty soft underneath! Nice write. Love Ernestine XXX
You can't help it when that little lip starts trembling...nice write Mary!
I DONT HAVE KIDS MYSELF (IM GUESSING THATS YOUR MAIN TARGET FOR THIS POEM) BUT I KNOW WHERE YOUR COMING FROM. GOOD POEM IAN
This is adorable. I'll bet they've got the waterworks down to an artform.
Ooh, you tyrant you! ! Definitely has the 'ring of truth' about it, Mary - loved it. Jon.
To see beyond the lesson and beyond the words, then to show the compassion.Yes, i'd say you were a good writer.Love Duncan