Tuesday, November 15, 2005

It's Time For Me To Get Tough! Comments

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That's it!
No more excuses!
I'm laying down some rules!
Just so you don't misunderstand...
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Mary Nagy
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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006

To see beyond the lesson and beyond the words, then to show the compassion.Yes, i'd say you were a good writer.Love Duncan

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Moya Levy 07 March 2006

ah you big softy you. lovely poem, Moya xx.

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Michael Shepherd 15 November 2005

She's REally annoyed! ... I'll have to do the tears thing... nice write, Mary, and neat rhyming...

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Ernestine Northover 15 November 2005

We're not as tough as we think we are Mary! ! ! ! ! We're pretty soft underneath! Nice write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 November 2005

You can't help it when that little lip starts trembling...nice write Mary!

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Uriah Hamilton 15 November 2005

Rules are made to be broken, right?

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Ian Curtis 15 November 2005

I DONT HAVE KIDS MYSELF (IM GUESSING THATS YOUR MAIN TARGET FOR THIS POEM) BUT I KNOW WHERE YOUR COMING FROM. GOOD POEM IAN

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Indiscreet Episode 15 November 2005

This is adorable. I'll bet they've got the waterworks down to an artform.

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Jon Lloyd 15 November 2005

Ooh, you tyrant you! ! Definitely has the 'ring of truth' about it, Mary - loved it. Jon.

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Declan McHenry 15 November 2005

Well captured Mary. And the form flows. Excellent.

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Tiyler Durden 15 November 2005

10 from Tiyler, super nice and very true...

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