Monday, December 10, 2018

'' It's Then We Find God '' Comments

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In life the beginning,
Is the start of the end,
Don't worry about sinning,
It's all part of the trend.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

The conscience burns us when we grow old and reflect on our sins i understand. I'm not old yet but this poem is awesome for me in rhyming and content. The deserved hard hitting lines a bit sarcastic are true to factual. Kudos. pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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