Wednesday, August 15, 2012

It's The Time To Beware Comments

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The day you loose your truffel around
And things seems to be going down and down
Then don't hold and sit around just fair
Because it's the time to beware!
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Sania Bashir 23 December 2012

@neetha..ma'am you men always spelling? sorry did'nt get you...can you tell more possiblely what to check, , , n thanks for your feedback...i truly appriciate

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Neetha Sasidharan 16 December 2012

grt .....grt rhymes...grt idea......evrthing is superb abt this.....kp going.... n in the last stanza the spelling of always seems to hv gone wrong...check it/....

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Sania Bashir 26 August 2012

thanx fr your views and corrections...i will take care f 'em

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Sanjay Mehta 23 August 2012

nicely woven cautious thoughts...........close to reality (truffel I think should be spelt as truffle)

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Sania Bashir 16 August 2012

Thank'Q for your appreciation sir

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