The day you loose your truffel around
And things seems to be going down and down
Then don't hold and sit around just fair
Because it's the time to beware!
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grt .....grt rhymes...grt idea......evrthing is superb abt this.....kp going.... n in the last stanza the spelling of always seems to hv gone wrong...check it/....
nicely woven cautious thoughts...........close to reality (truffel I think should be spelt as truffle)
@neetha..ma'am you men always spelling? sorry did'nt get you...can you tell more possiblely what to check, , , n thanks for your feedback...i truly appriciate