Sunday, March 28, 2010

It's The Meaning Of Life Comments

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It’s the dreams we have
And the way we walk
It’s the wishes ungranted
And the sound of talk
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Silver C. Day
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John Knight 08 April 2010

Hi Silver - I am honoured to be the first to comment on this elegant poem. It has excellent structure - rhyme and rhythm - I love it. The final line should be the title 'It's the meaning of life'. Life consists of all the things you highlight - Dreams - wishes - footprints - lies - poems - places - secrets - unknown - whispers - mistakes and tolerance. We all ask questions - we don't always get the answer we want or even expect. Life can be a drag and in the end it's the DREAMS and the WISHES and the POETRY that get us through the day. You say in your blurb that you have come through bad patches and life is better now - believe me when I say (and I am a few years older than you) if you have the power of positive thinking - and learn by your experience - life gets better and better as you grow older. This is especially true in Canada - the Country of Opportunity. thanks for sharing. Love through Poetry - JOHN

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