Sunday, December 14, 2008

[it's Tearing Me Apart] Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's tearing me apart,
these feelings I hate so much.
someone take the bullet out of my heart,
I need something solid to touch.
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Beautiful poetry. Everyone who read it thought you were speaking to them

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Alex Lewis 07 July 2009

Very sweet and well-written. I enjoyed it :)

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Awwe I loved it....simply adorable....and flowed 2gether so well. DIMPLzZ

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Serenity Prayer 23 December 2008

very cute, sweet poem. great job. i love it. beautifilly expressed and amazingly written.

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Jacob Courtney 14 December 2008

a truly amazing poem very true from the heart

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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