It's Still A Beautiful Day Comments

And still I saw-through the drippy wires The delighted children at play, all smiling, Because-you know-I'm sure I saw The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining. Beautiful poem. depicting the rainy day with the sunshine and the children playing in love and smile. t ony

The sky was a dark-ditch grey And yet I knew As I pulled back the blinds It was still- A beautiful Day... always finding the positive in life. very nice poem. tony

And still I saw, through the cloudy mist- The cloud with the silver lining. Because-you know-I'm sure I saw The sun-the beautiful sun- was still shining. it was still a beautiful day. inspite of all odds believing in positiveness. a Great poem indeed my dear poet. tony

And though I knew- it had just rained a bit too much And tempers were on edge And heard the screams of mothers wild As the soaked clothes lay- windswept On the hedge. A beautiful write dear poetess. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++

the beautiful sun shining, good write