Tuesday, July 27, 2010

It's So Hard To Say Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.5

I found you at an early age
Took you under my wings...
My joy, my love, is you
Nothing can separate you from me
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Juan Olivarez 09 August 2010

Unfortunately there have been too many good byes in my life, excellent work David, keep it up.

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Marina Gasbey 02 August 2010

It certainly is hard to say goodbye to the closest of friends. I think you captured the feeling of loss and sorrow quite well. Thanks so much for sharing... Marina...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 August 2010

May be spell check… ‘My joints are filled with pains’ [paints] ‘of a joyful past’ ~ lol ‘If my life were endless like time I'd be with you forever But its not And so, I have to say, 'Goodbye' ~ But Love is timeless …and lovers are ageless… Very good poetry where inspite of knowing ephemerality of everything Poet longs to stay grabbed with beloved… in fantasy and Poet like you fantasizing and it is compulsively just and must… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Keli Mims 28 July 2010

I love it. It's beautiful. If you get time please check out my poem 'Addicted' or 'Can't Sleep'. Please and thanks.

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Malaya Roses 27 July 2010

Everything shall change with time and at certain period of life, everything will be different. Our point of view, our choice, our determination and commitment shall goes foward with what time, age and desire required. Life should be appreciated and there is farewell for everything and everyone. No body can escape the reality that when our life's journey become longer, the path become shorter. Live your life and do what your heart telling you to do because this is your life and this is your jouney. Good poem.

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Briannaa Herman. 27 July 2010

You made this really easy to relate to.. Good job!

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Alicia Moore 27 July 2010

Enjoyed, clever! ! ! good: ]

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