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This is a good poem very insightful with last stanza of lines beautifully composed.....it's all about a tiny soul rushing toward its habitat at twilight hour when feet coming upon it knowingly or accidentally makes the treader to feel humble and submissive..........very well composed......I liked it

Way of life is unbiased always Craft of diversion is creator's side There the offender is inane always An invader is a hermit therein! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What a poem! Thoughtful and truthful.