It's Really Great To See You Around! Comments

A poem with true feel...Lovely write Shazia...Liked it.10+++

wonderful and lovely feelings are expressed in whether birds sing or sit so sad :)

Friends make the good times so much better, and help us through the sad times. Very original poem, I liked the refrain which reinforces the thought over and over.

i hear loads of melody as i read it to myself...and the crescendo is the refrain by way of closing lines...

a poem must be filled with fly of soul to words When jolly birds fly in the air and breeze plays with wanton hair when dreams meet with eyes' glare and every place has an air of fair

beautiful shazia to have u around.............so musical

@ Arkay ..........loveliest emotions so beautifully and lyrically and musically.. i so agree... written very well indeed :)

Elements of nature and romantic emotions have been blended in a splendid form, nucleus of all universe is only one thing that is the sentiment of love which the poetess wants to realize, else her whole life and entire structure of the universe is ineffective. The stars, the moon and the breeze etc. are meaningful if the hearts brim with the most precious item: Love. Lucid language with sooth cadence. Muhammad Shanazar

wow.. one of teh loveliest emotions so beautifully and lyrically and musically poeticised, , thanx

'Tis really great to see you around/ a great poem.. Wow, , I like the word- structure! ! ! Really great and amazing! ! Top marks! !