Monday, January 6, 2014

It`s Realisation Time Comments

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As the skin realizes
The aftermath of your aging, hey, man
You begin to falter at
Your revelations again and again.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Shahzia Batool 10 January 2014

Quotable lines having substance and matter: Experience is a comb that You are bound to possess When you are blessed with A bald head... a memorable work!

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Marvin Brato 09 January 2014

Great poem... life's realization gives meaning to our existence!

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Rubab Atwal 07 January 2014

an amazing poem, with beautiful lines..its true, its life that is not simple and very challenging, and to realize this fact is the best...loved reading it...

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Dinesan Madathil 07 January 2014

Realization and humanization of the educated stock stand as stumbling blocks... The human race has only one option left it seems - begetting the same tribe till infinity! Madam Valsa, out of your affinity and kind regard for me you always prefer to see me REALIZING the love and forgivence of 'God' much to my amusement. Thanks a lot for this Samaritan thoughts. I see just an angel flopping his wings in vain And would advise him to land down onto the even ground. 'Sneering' is the word most of your tribe would attribute for such views The other day I was reading about such ' liberal ' connotations' often thrown at a stretch. The world has ever been thus... it is a hopeless case now. These 'angels' ushering the 'souls' into the VOID of things IMAGINARY And this 'God' perplexed about the INNOCENT NON BELIEVERS extending a broad mind Cannot make even an iota of REALIZATION. Thank you Chandrupatla sir, Kavya and Shaleheenji for your kind of appreciation. A realization will be late, I mean very late, friends.

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Valsa George 07 January 2014

You sneer at a Heaven Waiting for souls like us! When you are ushered into its gates By angels sounding bugles Hey man, regret your words And wonder how strange are God's deeds!

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 07 January 2014

very nice realization.... Weep not and sigh not hey, man For it costs little and little for you To smile for a span of a small life After the realisation of everything dawns on! liked the verses..

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Kavya . 06 January 2014

how true...loved these lines...... Your realization, therefore, Better come a little before hey, man. hope we all take life with a smile and not deal with it very seriously as the span of life is very small.....

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 January 2014

An eternity you would long for Will cave into its void unknown. Beautiful lines are abundant in the poem. Life is not so simple. We need to realize this and take it with a smile. Thank you.

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