Saturday, May 10, 2014

It's Raining, It's Pouring Comments

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It's raining, it's pouring
But the old man isn't snoring
He's out by the lake
I'm trying to stay awake
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Jennifer Alejandra
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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2014

i wish you would give some details in the poets comments it is a clear reference to a very tense and horrifying experience you have done well in maintaining the white knuckle drama...the fear is palpable.. written very well liked

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