Sunday, March 30, 2008

It's Raining Again Comments

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Droplets of water dangle like crystals,
Wisps of mist waft gently between the trees.
Air is still, so very still, heavy, dank.
Birds flutter to feed, fluffing drenched feathers,
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Edith Oram
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Shaun William Hayes 27 July 2008

I agree with mary on this one, i could smell the wet earth, and the image of the mist. hmmm Well written. Shaun.

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Mary Gordley 06 April 2008

Oh I enjoyed reading this so much. Poems which capture elements of nature well are among my favorites.

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Edith Oram

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