It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart
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'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!
love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)
Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.
No wonder the song says memories don't live like people do, they always be you...!
What a beautiful poem this is~ worded so beautiful and tenderly....like the petals on a rose~
Bathed in memories...! . When the present is washed away, the past emerges, whispering someone's name you love! Love this romantic write! !
Tear-drops raining on heart's sidewalks. Beautiful metaphor. Thank you.
Pure romance in these words. Love the title washing away dreams of yesterday. Thank you
Good poem! I too wrote one about rain on a different vein. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline
Romantic and delicate memories of a past a fresh and white bouquet is what comes to my mind
Beautiful write with heartfelt sentiments and lovely imagery!
We have sentimental memories of our earlier phases of our life and tears simply bring them alive. Lovely poem.
Your mindscape offers a nature like imagery, though it is conceived in different colors! ! !
Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10