Saturday, November 14, 2015

It's Over Comments

Rating: 5.0

As if life depended on it
I'm swaying back and forth
Heart pounding out my breast
Just no time to rest
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Margarita Cortés
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Howard Savage 02 January 2016

Profound poem, to the point about reality, I am in agreement, things are not like they use to be. Keep writing, it's a 10

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Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem Howard!

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