Saturday, July 29, 2017

It's Our Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's our life,
It's all up to us,
What do we want from it,
How do we want to see it in future,
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Larika Shakyawar
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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2017

This nicely crafted poem brings to fore the interplay of noble and evil forces in life which terminates in the eternal message that 'Goodness is always working over the evil'. I share your views. Thanks a lot.

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Larika Shakyawar 31 July 2017

Thank you so much Rajnish sir...

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Larika. We can overcome all the difficulties with mind power. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Larika Shakyawar 31 July 2017

Thank you Jazib Kamalvi sir... And yes i will read your poem surely.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 July 2017

Reminds me of the song IT'S MY LIFE popularized by BON JOVI....Highest 10++++

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Larika Shakyawar 31 July 2017

Thanks a lot Bernard F. Asuncion sir

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