Friday, March 15, 2019

It's Not You Comments

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Still every night,
my heart beats suddenly shoot up too high,
how many nights my heart will take to be too low,
for a sleep that is free of dreams!
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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

প্রিয়তমা দ্যাখো; আমি চোখ বন্ধ করেছি নাহ! ঠিক চোখ বন্ধ নয় আমি তো অন্ধ! তবে এ অন্ধত্বে শুধু তোমায়ই দ্যাখি ও, হ্যাঁ তবে যে আমার মনের চোখ আছে।.......

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 March 2019

Seeing still when eyes are closed, seeing still without dreams, yes indeed heart has her own eyes. Very feelingly written.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 March 2019

yes I just read it on your page that brought me here poet dear JA JI

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2019

A very touching write. It vividly captures the longings of the heart. Beautifully written.

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