Saturday, October 7, 2017

It's Not Yet Too Late A Comment On Rini Shibu's Poem Scratches) Comments

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Some unspoken words touch softly
titliate the heart without any pleasure
cause the tiny nerves carry a message
to be stored in in the unconscious parts of the brain
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Savita Tyagi 21 October 2017

This is analytical as well as very philosophical not to mention some confusion of heart's restrained expression. I may have to read Rini's poem to grasp fully some background of your poem. Though it is perfect in itself.

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

This is really a great poem.. Thank a lot for reading my poem 'scratches', I am glad that you liked and it inspired you to write this wonderful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2017

This is nice tribute poem for Rini. Some unspoken words touch softly. These bring emotion in mind and heart beats. Season goes on changing but harvesting every moral moment is interesting and wise. Brilliantly penned poem is shared is perceptional.10

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