Sunday, May 24, 2009

(it’s Not) To Everyone Under 18 Comments

Rating: 3.4

“You’re doing it wrong! ”
“You can’t do anything right! ”
Echo’s through your ears once more.
Coming with is tears that try to exit your eyes.
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Ramesh Rai 21 December 2013

A thoughtful write. certainly deserving.

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Rahul Rajawat 27 August 2009

here us poem my heart could whistle at lonely night, reading this i can recall all what i have lived, as i m 18yrs

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Aijaz Asif 12 August 2009

bravo, bravo.....a marvelous and very moving piece...and i can see myself in this beautiful write of yours.....added to my most favs. many, many 10'sssssssssss rgds asif

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i thnak oyu for writng this, as many of my young freinds on here, experience such.

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Janell Cressman 24 May 2009

I give you points for righting that! ! !

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