Thursday, October 22, 2015

It's Not That He Doesn't Care Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought I knew the reason why
As I sadly killed a dragonfly
When rescue’d been my whole intent
His legs in sap like firm cement
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Wes Vogler 25 November 2015

Being an atheist I can only judge this poem on style, rhythm and ability to communicate. I notice I am the only one to rate him so far it's a 10

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Brian Mayo 25 November 2015

God bless you, my friend.

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Neran Sati 23 October 2015

cute, charming irony!

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