Thursday, August 16, 2012

It's Not Me But.... Comments

Rating: 3.9

It's not me but my shadow.
Once has been in me,
The shadow behind-
Now, I don't want to be,
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Neela Nath Das
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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

I think we all have a shadow side - this poem is a great expression of that. Good one Nil.

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Kelly Seale 17 August 2012

...I'll stay in my shadow's arm. -Love how you ended this. Excellect write! -Kelly.

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Kasia Fedyk 16 August 2012

I love it Nila, I do the same many times and the discoveries are endless from one to another what a bounty of gifts come. beautiful!

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Anush Gupta 16 August 2012

The light made shadow will cover your soul from the darkness.

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Babatunde Aremu 16 August 2012

Great poem. I like the title. Writers do pour out their illnesses in their writings. This is a typical one. Keeping pouring

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