Thursday, January 17, 2013

It's Not Me. Comments

Rating: 4.0

He didn't see me,
when he looked in my eyes,
He tried to cover it with copious lies,
I know I should have ended it,
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Hannah York
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Negar Gorji 24 February 2013

oh, so sadness. well done.

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Kelvin Owusu 23 January 2013

a nice poem, some good lines, nice work

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Gajanan Mishra 17 January 2013

When he looked in my eyes. good love. thanks.

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