Wednesday, November 11, 2015

It's Not Fiction Comments

Rating: 5.0

Disappeared through the fabric of curtains,
Worst dream of yesterday
And the sorrows I dug out from night's womb,
As the God of our galaxy enters this place.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 January 2016

Light is peace and love. Nice work.

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Bharati Nayak 14 November 2015

we don't need to close our eyes for dreaming.Instead an open heart would be perfect- - - Such beautiful thoughts enlighten us.Thanks for the wonderful poem.

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Valsa George 13 November 2015

We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Quite true....... dreams we see with eyes open take us to great heights, but dreams with closed eyes evanesce with day light! Every morning is an avenue to new dreams and new visions! Great poem Sanjukta!

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Liza Sudina 12 November 2015

To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats. = you found the way out of your small spleen at last! good!

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect Perfectly said. Thanks, Sanjukta

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2015

Yet another crafty poem with silken touch...Loved it SN....10+++

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Shakil Ahmed 11 November 2015

very good poem, We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats- these lines give a clear message for the people in general, thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 11 November 2015

what you wrote is very true for I don't wake up till lunch lovely poem thanks-10

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Vishal Sharma 11 November 2015

you dissolve sweetness to your poetry in a right proportion.A great poetry to share with.10

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Simone Inez Harriman 11 November 2015

'We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats.' Beautiful words. I enjoyed your poem Sanjukta

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