Disappeared through the fabric of curtains,
Worst dream of yesterday
And the sorrows I dug out from night's womb,
As the God of our galaxy enters this place.
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we don't need to close our eyes for dreaming.Instead an open heart would be perfect- - - Such beautiful thoughts enlighten us.Thanks for the wonderful poem.
We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Quite true....... dreams we see with eyes open take us to great heights, but dreams with closed eyes evanesce with day light! Every morning is an avenue to new dreams and new visions! Great poem Sanjukta!
To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats. = you found the way out of your small spleen at last! good!
We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect Perfectly said. Thanks, Sanjukta
Yet another crafty poem with silken touch...Loved it SN....10+++
very good poem, We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats- these lines give a clear message for the people in general, thanks for sharing.
what you wrote is very true for I don't wake up till lunch lovely poem thanks-10
you dissolve sweetness to your poetry in a right proportion.A great poetry to share with.10
'We don't need to close eyes for dreaming, Instead an open heart would be perfect To dissolve the shadows of dark Into the white rays of today's happy-beats.' Beautiful words. I enjoyed your poem Sanjukta
Light is peace and love. Nice work.