It's Not Fair Comments

The part about 'someone you haft to love' indicates to me a family member. Just remember one thing Jenn, I think it goes 'You can please some of the people sometimes, but you can never please everyone all the time'. I guess what im trying to say here is, if you know this person is not going to be pleased with what you do, then stop trying to please them. Please yourself from now on and eventually they might come around. This seemed more like a bottle up outburst than it did a poem but full of emotion just as well. I liked the content, and the emotions envolved here so I still give you a 10. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

Nicely done. Vividly describe loss, wanting and denial. Is this about you at all? Because it's pretty descriptive, I'm not complaining lol. When people write personal poems I find them more enjoyable and I'm able to connect with them. Great job!