Saturday, August 22, 2015

It’s Not A Love Story Comments

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Yes, It’s not a love story,
It’s story of two Pakistanis,
Sharing their pains on The Face Book,
A great website of social contacts,
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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2015

A wonderful poem, beautiful narrative piece... Thanks for sharing Akhtar. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Valsa George 26 August 2015

Read through this entire love story with bated breath to know the end...... I wonder whose story it is! Is it the story of the poet himself......? Is that poet this poet? Then who is this modern Lucy Gray who has inspired the poet..... these are all doubts left! Let the poet and the girl thrive as Wordsworth and Lucy! Let no mishap fall on Lucy..... I pray!

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Rajnish Manga 22 August 2015

It is Indeed a lovely story though it has an element of pain on both sides. Poet and poetess likened to Wordsworth and Lucy. They both are endowed with incredible mental faculties. May their facebook friendship prosper further. The narrative descends right upon the heart.

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Khalid Saifullah 22 August 2015

A wonderful poem.........................................................10

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