Tuesday, December 15, 2015

It's Never Too Late Comments

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Tears fall on a forgotten grave,
The lonely and the brave,
Silence is at ease here with souls to save,
Names carved out on polished stone,
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 August 2019

For in their life they gave their hearts to lift Kindness, goodness and an eternal love God's greatest gift, ../// yeah; exactly written

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Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

A lovely piece on the dead written in beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Hazel.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2017

Tears fall in a forgotten grave! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mizzy ........ 15 October 2016

Lovely warm sentiments for our fallen relations who dance in the spirit world Hazel...... It certainly helps to quell the sadness. Beautifully penned as always!

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Annette Aitken 25 August 2016

A lovely write here Hazel...very enjoyable read.. Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

It's never too late to change in life. Nice work.

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Jak Black 21 December 2015

Another great sentiment here, Hazel. Wish I had your belief though, life would be much more bearable knowing that peace and joy will be the ultimate reward.

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Valsa George 16 December 2015

Those who gave abundant measure of love and helped others in their time of need have peace and rest in their sleep. They resurrect to an eternal life of joy and bliss and live happy in a world which knows no hate or envy! A beautiful poem on the dead!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Very amazing poem on death topic is composed. With lonely brave in silence tears fall down. Simple lives awake and in kindness God gifts his love which is greatest gift so far we realize. Very interesting composition shared definitely. Nicely penned.10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2015

A bounty of love, joy and endless happy dreams in their sleep, They have no need, they are at peace indeed, For in their life they gave their hearts to lift Kindness, goodness and an eternal love God's greatest gift, What a beautiful poem, particularly the above mentioned great lines. A nice description of an ideal and immortal life after death.....................................10

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