Sunday, August 16, 2015

It’s My Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this world nothing is static,
Everything is dynamic,
The expanding universe gives a message,
I am expanding, I am changing,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 06 August 2016

Change is inevitable and it is part of growing up.....! As you have rightly put, one who says.... 'I will not change' is challenging Nature! ! Though true love is constant, the shades of change, it undergoes over time has to be seen in the right perspective..... The way you have described the change coming over love is truly remarkable..... Indeed a great poem...10+

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Bisma Mirza 19 August 2015

wow! ! Beautiful............love it! ! 10 on 10..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2015

I welcome changes, I am not obstinate......yes, we must not obsinate as the Nature is changeable. Nice story of human nature depicted fantastically.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2015

Yes, we all have stories to tell in life; with stages and phases, as we show up our faces to the world. Nice work.

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Mark Heathcote 16 August 2015

Your narration and langue is beautiful don’t ever change. Nice one.

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Kelly Kurt 16 August 2015

A universal story. True; whether we like it or not. Well done! !

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