Girl it's been quite a year long
In earth where you have been too?
I just keep summing up my time
from the moment I have seen you
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this piece is very appealing..glad ur back my dearest friend..keeeooonnnnnnn, my goshhhhhhhh...every stanza talks tenderness...each lines speaks desire...and each word expresses love...this will go to my fav, promise, , , expressions are important in making poetries.. more expressions means excellent...this is it..nicely done..
Its beauty and very you when ya wrote these lines...Wonder ya write so beautiful lines that speak so much abt tenderness! ! ! ! ..........Love Winnie