Sunday, April 1, 2018

It's Midnight Let Us Write A Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

"The old clock of my late grandfather
has struck twelve times.
We have too much talked!
We talked about our childhood,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2018

Cont. typo...beautiful words have been woven. Moreover, the picture of the pretty woman enhanced the beauty of this poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2018

Wow, this is a timeless poem of love. The beautiful words that has been woven in this magnificent piece mesmerized me from the start to the end. It captures the beauty, wonders and eternality of love.The other side of the poem also touches on the essence of being a woman. Loved the fourth and last stanza. A great piece worth of being read again. Into my Poem List.10

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Loke Kok Yee 02 April 2018

You are truly the master on this subject, you can see it from every aspect and turn it into a beautiful poem. Thank you sir.

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 April 2018

A lovely poem about lasting love.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 April 2018

Akhtar, such a great poem.......10++++++++++

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