You might think there’s a creepy castle,
Lost somewhere in time,
You might think it has ghosts all around,
But it’s just in your mind.
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Got really fascinated by your work. After all these poems are wonderfully written with specified words across each line. Good job! 👍
This poem is an unconditional way to cast out fear from my mind. I like it.
This poem has lessened our fear of some things and stories. Nice poem
Really? Well, certain things are more real than we can imagine. But thank you for lessening our fear about some things.
Sinister shadows and figments of imagination without substance and therefore inconsequential well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
It's Just In Your Mind. I love this poem. It's something I migt read to my sister to keep her from yelling out at night sometimes. I love how your 'imaginary creatures' varied from not only children's fears, but the fears that mankind has. Keep on writing and such: -)
nice children poem and all believes and fear they might have. you are a good writer.
Meriam A young life that by her mature write Awakened dormant hearts Your invite provided A great surprise Your poetry flowed like many bats In flight through a dark night Oh! so fright Those verses bumped 'n danced in all rhyme Ahhh! 'It's just in your mind' Keep your poems alive May your verses continue in light Bumping about in the night. --- Meriam if you may read when you have some time and comment/score my poems: #12 Quixote and #17 The Monk. Thanks
sweet write....it's good to believe in some things..others are best left in ur head! SG
Ohhh... that's why no one belived me when i yelled ghost in the third grade. He was there just not to anyone but me :)) Jk, i like your poem though.
Awesome.... Its correctly mention.. its just in your mind..connected to assumption; since assumptions are not always right.. its a belief.... thanks you.. you have a genius mind.. thanks for sharing...10 points