Friday, August 5, 2011

It's Just In Your Mind Comments

Rating: 4.9

You might think there’s a creepy castle,
Lost somewhere in time,
You might think it has ghosts all around,
But it’s just in your mind.
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Ryson Dsouza 01 July 2016

Awesome.... Its correctly mention.. its just in your mind..connected to assumption; since assumptions are not always right.. its a belief.... thanks you.. you have a genius mind.. thanks for sharing...10 points

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Mohamed Fazloon 18 October 2015

Got really fascinated by your work. After all these poems are wonderfully written with specified words across each line. Good job! 👍

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This poem is an unconditional way to cast out fear from my mind. I like it.

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Kpekot Egweteng 20 June 2015

This poem has lessened our fear about some stories.

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Kpekot Egweteng 20 June 2015

This poem has lessened our fear of some things and stories. Nice poem

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Kpekot Egweteng 20 June 2015

Really? Well, certain things are more real than we can imagine. But thank you for lessening our fear about some things.

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Chinedu Dike 30 March 2015

Sinister shadows and figments of imagination without substance and therefore inconsequential well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ashley Davis 25 September 2013

That was fantastic! I loved it! :)

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Stella Mary 30 December 2011

I; ll surely read this poem to my sister when she's afraid.

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William King 25 August 2011

It's Just In Your Mind. I love this poem. It's something I migt read to my sister to keep her from yelling out at night sometimes. I love how your 'imaginary creatures' varied from not only children's fears, but the fears that mankind has. Keep on writing and such: -)

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Mohammed Albalushi 24 August 2011

very nice poem, i like it thanks 4 sharing

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Christina Phan 17 August 2011

nice children poem and all believes and fear they might have. you are a good writer.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 August 2011

Very good writing, , its just in ur mind...

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Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

you are a great writer... keep it up

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Leon Villegas 12 August 2011

Meriam A young life that by her mature write Awakened dormant hearts Your invite provided A great surprise Your poetry flowed like many bats In flight through a dark night Oh! so fright Those verses bumped 'n danced in all rhyme Ahhh! 'It's just in your mind' Keep your poems alive May your verses continue in light Bumping about in the night. --- Meriam if you may read when you have some time and comment/score my poems: #12 Quixote and #17 The Monk. Thanks

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Jisha Ct 12 August 2011

very nice dear.enjoyed reading...do keep writing..

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Shadow Girl 12 August 2011

sweet write....it's good to believe in some things..others are best left in ur head! SG

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John Jerry 12 August 2011

...it's just in ur mind...is really artistic and informing.

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Samantha Bell 12 August 2011

Ohhh... that's why no one belived me when i yelled ghost in the third grade. He was there just not to anyone but me :)) Jk, i like your poem though.

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Elizabeth Grace 12 August 2011

This is great :) Keep working, and you will be amazing.

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