Thursday, November 20, 2014

It's From Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

A hasty wind passed by
Fall few leaves on grassy yard
Blow that takes to the frenzy yard
Wrinkled part that tease sometimes
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Heather Wilkins 02 December 2014

few lives mend to help and strive change the history with its thumb nice lines

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 24 November 2014

Nice imaginations and poem also.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2014

An Offer that fertile next dawn There sprout few from that sacrifice- very nicely envisioned. I like most. Thanks.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 November 2014

Wrinkled part that tease sometimes Past that ruined in overhaul beautiful poem i like these lines most

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Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2014

Few lives mend for help and strive Change the history with its thumb You reminded me the great men and women who changed the world. A beauyiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 November 2014

Yes flowers beautify and leaves satisfy......being fertile fulfill the desires of the earth and itself a boon for sustaining life of its source as Nature.......born to serve selflessly.....an amazing piece with a great message

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2014

Feed the giant with these old nerves- wonderful poem

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