Friday, July 26, 2013

It's Fate! Comments

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If Owning a thing
Is my fate
Enjoying it may or may not
Be my fate
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 November 2022

The delicious dinner Kept ready for someone But enjoyed by someone Is the fate....absolutely correct dear poetess. Appreciated this poem.

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Emeyazia Iwe Chukwudi 29 July 2013

You left me with reflections. Do the best we can tanks poetess.

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

your last stanza is the answer we are ALL SEEKING. DO THE BEST WE CAN AND MAKE THE BEST FROM WHICH WE HAVE. GOOD WRITE

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Kavya . 27 July 2013

hey a v nice poem Geetha and a good imagination too......u r right, we cannot keep blaming fate everytime but do our best and get returns in some or other form. Enjoyed reading! The mangoes para is very intriguing.

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Kavya . 27 July 2013

hey a v nice poem Geetha and a good imagination too......u r right, we cannot keep blaming fate everytime but do our best and get returns in some or other form. Enjoyed reading! The mangoes para is very intriguing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 July 2013

I travel by same train everyday. But one day I changed my train and I met my very old friend. We will tell...what a coincidence..fate was to meet friend. Either my thoughts made me change the train or i got late on tat particular day or some other reason made me change the train.Or this could happen to my friend too..But fate was to meet the friend.

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R.j. Wynn 26 July 2013

I love it, it will work.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

make the best from what you have, very fine, thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

make the best from what you have, very fine, thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

make the best from what you have, very fine, thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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