It's Death Again Comments

Hmmm the one I read years ago which is written on my back is a little different. It's The toll that's only meant for me, to say: you're next, it has to be. Guess there will always be slight variations in such poems.

Death is certain. It is there at the end. No one can escape. Good poem, reminds me of my poem called, 'What is Death? '

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Death is certain so no matter to grab.

Death is certain so no matter to grab.

It's a pretty poem about death.

Outstanding poem! Great rhythm! Excellent expression.

Or reach to pull the window blind

Ah, the inevitable. An honest take on our desires to avoid it.

That would be creepy and it creeped me out. STALKER ELERT!

This poem kind of creeped me out thinking about death so much. I dont know why i even clicked on it, but im sure i did. The poem gives a brief descrition of the feeling of death. Talking about how your next, and how death is awating. Very talented rymes that flow throug the poem. Very well done.

i think you are a very great poet. It gives off a lot of emotion and i can actually tell what you are writing about. It inspires me. Just great work and keep it up. I'd give u a 10! ! ! ! ! ! !

you scared me to death and i hope that's not true

Through the whole thing I got chills

There are chills running down my spine! You capture the fear of death so eloquently.

Nice Poem, short, concise, and to the point; even though it goes against all facts and plays on everyone's fear, it thus fulfills its purpose very well. It has a good familiar rhythm and it rhymes, making it easy to remember, so I am forced to give it a 9.0, and to me - a tough critic (i.e. Blake's A Poison Tree, which I consider one of the best ever, and was reluctant to give it a 10) , but an average writer at best - That's a very good poem! ! ! ! I didn't vote, I'll let your readers determine that grade.

i feel the same way about death. he is there waiting because everybody dies on day. i felt very attacted to this poem. thanks for sharing it. P.S i feel; like killing people but you dont because humans are not death.

This is most favorite poem, great job! id give it a 20 out of 10 - off the charts

Short but you still get the full storm of emotion.

I loved this poem great job!