Thursday, May 22, 2008

It’s Called Making Love Comments

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You were cold after diving,
your wet suit still clinging,
you said I could warm you
with my own body heat,
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Louise Tredoux
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Roland Bastien 26 May 2008

Your poem is very visual. I can see all your moves

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Michael Campbell 22 May 2008

great imagery and that bit o convo. that's making love. so well put!

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