Wednesday, January 6, 2016

It's Better....... Comments

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Tears are flowing in dilemma
Let it flow out to cool down, it's better

Till when should I preserve this with me?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2016

Near to truth, it's always better to keep patience.

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

The poem treats the ups and downs of a relationship rather eloquently along with the probable ways of resolving the same. Thank you for sharing this fantastic poem, Md. Asim ji. I want to forget them yet they come wandering Let these memories fade with time, it's better

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Kelly Kurt 06 January 2016

Another great philosophical poem. Let the painful memories fade, as they tend to do

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 January 2016

Badi muddat se gotakhor laga rahe hain dubkiyan Ye moti mil hi jaye to achcha hai Anginat khwahishein aur uske poore hone ki umeed...issi kashmakash ka naam zindagi hai..bohot hi khoobsurat kalam aur english ka transleration bhi khoob hai. Dilli daad aur..10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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