Thursday, May 23, 2013

It's Better Comments

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It's better to stay
out of sight.
It's better
to stop all fight.
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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

Its better to be silent it's better to open a new page. true.

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Vishal Sharma 11 June 2013

great piece of work indeed your poems have different charming nice

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David Wood 07 June 2013

Every new day is an unwritten page just waiting.

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Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem

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Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem

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Valsa George 03 June 2013

To begin all over anew with new resolutions and fresh hopes is what is required to keep life florid and sprightly! ! Enjoyed! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 02 June 2013

I also don't love the lime light, so staying out of sight is ideal for me. I think that answers Jasmeen's question. Its not always easy starting on a new page but its the only way one can build his or her future, you forget the past and start anew, starting on a new page gives you new challenges but its worth facing them. Siya_! !

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Yasmin Khan 29 May 2013

It's terse and easy on mind and carries an important message. But why to be out of sight?

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Valerie Dohren 25 May 2013

Wise words Hari - nice write. Have you read mine 'Better to, Rather than.....'

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R.j. Wynn 25 May 2013

Amen brother Hari, don't worry, be happy.

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Unwritten Soul 25 May 2013

Start new page, writing new beautiful flow in colorful glow! ! start new and it's better_Soul

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Kanav Justa 25 May 2013

says a lot, , this poem of yours, , nicely done

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 May 2013

Nice poem let us open a page to remove the pangs of humanity

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