It's Been So Long..... Comments

sadful beautiful poem! finely in short said a lot 10+++

That goes straight into the heart... 'a chill of clod pain a fear of lifeless rain an evil through the pure crane a pain above all peakless pain' Its really been very long! ! Love Gul

as the moments fleck into the air the still nature changes by colors that was there by that time, as of now still lost into the moment by that time yet that comes again but in different colors seeming all strange by the feeling, wonderful imagery of love by the life as ever changing, wellpenned,19+, thanks for sharing