Thursday, October 15, 2015

It's Been Raining For So Long Comments

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There is nothing more satisfying
Than to know who you are
How long it has taken
You have travelled so far
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Lyn Paul
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Jennifer Birchall 05 June 2019

We cannot change others we begin to realise we can only change ourselves. A very powerful poem dear Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

How long it has taken! ! Nice piece of work.

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Maria Gonzalez 26 October 2015

It is the truth Lyn, sometimes we give so much, we end up giving ourselves away. We do need to stop and think of ourselves sometimes and be kind to ourselves as well. Day by day, step by step, we will return to ourselves. Then we will operate our lives with more wisdom. We will give, but give wisely. Thank you Lyn. I always appreciate your poems. They reach me. Stay blessed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2015

Yet nothing can be changed Except to actually think of you...A very thoughtful and nice poem shared really. This expresses love here....10

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Michael Walker 15 October 2015

I think that life is a puzzle from birth. We have to look after ourselves in the struggle. It can keep raining for a long time. Michael Walker.

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

Yes, at least occasionally, one should think of themselves first. I felt the pain and the revelation in this poem, Lyn. Superb write!

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Tony Karas 15 October 2015

HUGE HUGS.... this is a powerful write

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