Monday, June 9, 2008

It's Been Ages Since We'Ve Become Strangers...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's been ages since we've become strangers,
Now this isn't about me it's about you.
Since then all i've heard about you,
is how often you get drunk.
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Priyanka Shetty
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Preetam Shetty 05 April 2010

Loved this poem...you can really feel the agony both the lovers are going through because destiny was not in their favour One of the two is hiding the pain behind the curtains of addictives while the other has nothing more than words...brilliant

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premji premji 29 July 2008

'love is a disease' - garcia marquez

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angelianne 1012 09 June 2008

a nice writing and a reminder to all.. well done..thanks for sharing! ! ! .. deserves a 10...

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U Win Kyi 09 June 2008

hi, PS.. an excellent poem...which brings me to memory of my father who died from lung cancer.He was a chronic smoker. About 5 years later, my mother died from the same disease.She was passively inhaling the smoke, I think. Would you please read mine A smoker SOB. If someone read our poems and quit smoking, it is worth writing. Best wishes thanks....U Win Kyi.

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