Friday, April 19, 2019

It's Been A Year Comments

Rating: 5.0

They came and took you away that day
I was not ready but did not get a say
All I can think is that someone needed you more
Otherwise they would have left you here, I am sure
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Jennifer Birchall
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Lodigiana Poetess 20 April 2019

A beautiful tribute to someone you loved very much. Nothing ever really prepares us for the loss of a parent and although we know that is the way of things it's still tough to get through. A well written, tender piece that speaks to every childs heart. + 10 Lodigiana xx

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Amir Marandi 19 April 2019

Loosing a loved one, especially those closest to you, is always hard. Thanks for sharing.

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Julia Luber 19 April 2019

Sounds like a catastrophe parting. Unclear who " they" who took you away are.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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