Monday, August 24, 2009

It's At A Time Like This Comments

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It’s at a time like this
That I try to convince myself
To stay positive and enthused
But its one of those days
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Allie Lusha
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Daniel Blevins 28 September 2009

Another great poem! I love how your poems are somewhat dark, somewhat gloomy, yet at the same time they are positive and appreciative of your friends, and the people around you, and just in the everyday things in life in general. Great write! :) ~

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Muzzie Junkie 24 August 2009

I really like this part.. 'when I'm feeling down and blue I'm so lucky to have a friend in you I know that you're thinking What to do or say To help my troubles fade away To put that smile back on my face To take me to a happier place' nicely written thou...10+

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